I’ve shared my thoughts on analyzing beta feedback and the issues the betas point out in mid-September. Today, I’ll share how the chain of events feels for me from receiving the feedback to acting on it.
Stage one: Fear
Have you ever felt this? You get a message from your beta with the next set of comments attached (or a notification about comment if you use a webtool such as Google Docs or betareader.io) and go into the ‘oh my god, here comes the proof my writing is sh*t’ mood. It’s how it tends to be for me, especially in the early chapters. Even if the beta is insightful and points out issues in a constructive way, I still fear they’ll tear my story apart. Worse, I fear it’ll be rightfully so.
Thus, it can easily happen for me to wait a few days (2-5) to actually look at the comments.
Stage two: A glance over
Then comes the first actual look. I glance over the notes and see how frequent they are and of what type – but don’t act on it yet. What I do is to make some guesstimate on how much time I’ll need for each of the next stages – preferably to take them in longer rather than short sessions.
Stage three: minor issues, major notes
In this stage, I fix the small things – typos, grammar, incorrect verb form, minor sentence structure issues… anything that’s mostly mechanical and doesn’t require much thinking or creativity – and is done quickly.
Then, I go through the rest of the feedback and put the notes into my ‘main’ file, in different color, so when I go through it next it’ll be obvious where the to-edit passage is.
Stage four: medium issues
At this point, I am entering the stage of actual rewrites. I begin with changes that span a few paragraphs such as a (part of) dialogue, an explanation of something (when changed for lack of clarity), a description of a character or a place, and so on.
There’s some amount of creative work in this stage but it’s still minor, focused on improving what I have without chaging much. Another example of this stage might be edits to remove head-hopping or changing from telling to showing.
Stage five: chapter-sized issues
Then, I get to edits that require major rewrites – a page or longer. This might mean a major overhaul or a complete rewrite of a scene (or sequence of scenes) for various purposes. Even if the core of a scene stays the same and I only change the approach (or tone), it usually requires some degree of creative thinking (compared to ‘autopilot fixing’) which means this stage is much slower. Re-write of a chapter can take almost as long as writing a chapter from the scratch.
Stage six: pondering major issues
This is what comes if there’s an issue spanning more than a chapter. In most cases, it happens when I consider a major cut/rewrite. So far, this had happened twice in the larger scope: when I made a massive cut to the beginning (removing 3,5 chapters with edits needed in a few more) and when I added a series of 3 chapters where the MC goes through some internal struggle in the middle.
Now, I am consideiring a third major change, which would lead to cutting maybe 3-5 chapters but with significant impact on 10+ other chapters, including several major events (from the MC’s PoV) which would need to be solved before I would make the call for/against the cut.
Stage seven: The big deal
The abovementioned issues are usually something I approach only after everything else was dealt with. Between the batches of feedback, I consider the options I have for sorting the problem out and make notes about those ideas but don’t go for it yet – maybe some note in the later part might nudge me in a different direction to consider.
Then, I try to delve into these major things in just a few days. Since those often include writing several passages from scratch, I usually give the new passages an extra typo-hunting pass or two.
Stage eight: Rest
When everything is done, I put the story aside for a while (2-4 weeks) to let it rest. During that time, I either read something or work on another part of my ‘grand project’ such as early drafts of the other books in the to-be series. Then, after that rest, I give it a self-read to see if there’s anything that should get my attention before the cycle begins anew…
So, this is a look into my writing process in this later stage. I’ll welcome your comments and questions.
See you next time, and keep writing.
Receiving feedback isn’t easy. I’m still new to it also.
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